StoryFlow Worksheet

Part I – Logline Breakout

Rewrite a targeted logline and capture peer feedback.

Logline Feedback Notes

Rewrite your targeted logline (3Ps of ARCS)

Part I: Logline Breakout Rubric

Instructions for Peers

Listen closely
Score each category (1–3 pts)
Ask one curiosity question and share feedback

A great logline:

Gives a clear sense of context
Leaves a listener feeling like they have more answers than questions
Sparks curiosity to learn more

Criteria	Exceeds Expectations (3 pts)	Meets Expectations (2 pts)	Needs Improvement (1 pt)
Logline Clarity & Structure	Clear, concise logline with all 3Ps of ARCS (Protagonist, Problem, Plan) easy to retell in one breath.	Logline mostly follows structure; understandable but missing one piece or wordy.	Logline is unclear, incomplete, or missing major elements.
Curiosity Spark	Strongly invites follow-up questions; listeners are eager to know more.	Listeners can ask at least one follow-up question.	Difficult to engage with; no curiosity sparked.
Speaking Presence	Confident: clear voice, steady pace, minimal filler words, good posture and eye contact.	Generally clear with some minor hesitation or fillers.	Distracting fillers, rushed or monotone delivery, low engagement.

Part II – The Core Narrative Writing Sprint

Pair the Outer Journey (what happened) with the Inner Journey (your transformation).

Protagonist

Define the Protagonist and their status quo.

What beliefs or assumptions did I start with (Before)?

Problem

What primary challenge emerged?

What experience challenged that belief?

Plan

What strategy or solution was proposed?

What approach (accurate or flawed) did I initially believe in?

Antagonist

What force pushed back against the plan?

What resistance exposed the flaw? Impact?

Reaction

How did the antagonistic force respond, causing friction?

What emotion did that trigger? How did I manage my reaction?

Conflict

What tension or escalation nearly derailed the outcome?

What did I struggle with in myself? Turning point?

Solution

How was the issue resolved? What changed (external)?

What truth did I accept? Growth (After)?

Part III – Reflection Questions

What fascinates or excites you about this story?

What outcome do you want from telling this story?

What do you want to inspire your audience to do next?

Part IV – Audience Analysis

Audience 1 – name or role/team

Audience 2 – name or role/team

Audience 1 – What they care about most

Audience 2 – What they care about most

Audience 1 – Pain point

Audience 2 – Pain point

Audience 1 – Opportunity

Audience 2 – Opportunity

Audience 1 – Story details to focus on

Audience 2 – Story details to focus on

Part V – Your Fascinating Core

Fascinating Core (one sentence)

Append Fascinating Core to the end of the story in Part VI

Part VI – Putting It Together

Your continuous story is composed from earlier parts. Edit freely before exporting.

Part VII – Peer Coaching Rubric

Instructions for Peers: Listen closely, score each category (1–3 pts), and ask one curiosity question with feedback.

Criteria	Exceeds Expectations (3 pts)	Meets Expectations (2 pts)	Needs Improvement (1 pt)
Story Clarity & Structure	Clear, complete, structured with 3Ps of ARCS + resolution; polished, cohesive narrative.	Understandable and mostly complete; may miss resolution or run long/wordy.	Unclear or incomplete; confusing to follow.
Transformation Detail	Vividly shows before/after growth; authentic and memorable.	Some change is mentioned but shallow or implied.	No sense of transformation.
Audience Connection & Relevance	Strong resonance; empathy and clear relevance to audience needs.	Moderate connection; not fully tailored.	Generic or self-focused; weak relevance.
Curiosity Spark	Invites follow-up questions; listener eager for more.	At least one natural follow-up question possible.	No curiosity sparked.
Speaking Presence	Confident voice, steady pace, expressive tone; strong posture & eye contact.	Generally clear with minor hesitations.	Distracting fillers or flat delivery.
Delivery Flow & Timing	Polished, smooth, fits 60–90 sec with impactful pacing.	Mostly smooth; slightly long/short.	Disorganized or poorly timed.

Further Verbal Feedback

Coaching Prompts for Discussion:

What details feel most or least impactful for the audience they’re speaking to?
What is one thing that would make this story stronger?
What else are you curious about?

Part VIII – Completion

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