Catalyst to Catharsis Coaching Intensive

What you get with a Beta Read from Najla Mamou:

  • A read of your 60k-90k word manuscript (for up to 120k, please select the order bump on the checkout field) from an experienced agent and editor
  • A 4-6 page in-depth critique on strengths and areas for improvement in the following areas: Character Journey/Development, POV, Plot, Beginning, Pacing and Tension, Repetition, Dialogue and Voice, Showing vs. Telling, World Building, Sensory details, Chapter immersion and re-immersion, Scene descriptions, Historical or other accuracy checks, Secondary Characters and Antagonist(s) Evaluation, and the Ending
  • A line edit recommendations summary
  • Comments and line edits added as comments on the manuscript
  • Deeper line editing on the first 5 chapters, which is what agents see first