What you get with a First Chapters Developmental & Line Edit with Najla Mamou:

• An extensively detailed edit of your first three chapters (choose the order bump at checkout to increase to five chapters)
• A thorough line edit with comments in your manuscript
• Editorial notes and suggestions regarding opening pages, voice, dialogue, repetition, world building, deep POV, secondary characters, red herrings, missed cliffhangers, pacing, showing vs. telling, scene structure & development, character choreography, foreshadowing, and more