Get a Chapter Analysis with Sophie

Get a second pair of eyes on your writing!

This is a full analysis on any chapter from your work in progress with expert coach Sophie Jonas-Hill. She will help you consider:

  • The effectiveness of your prose
  • The way it builds character and atmosphere
  • If it delivers the impact and impression you want
  • If it's serving your overall narrative.

Not only will this improve this chapter, but your writing overall!

Clients are invited to submit a brief 250-500 word synopsis or outline introducing your book, and a chapter of up to 2,500 words for analysis. 

You will then have a one-hour video session with Sophie to discuss your piece and you will receive a comprehensive set of notes to review afterwards.  

*Order bump available for chapters up to 5000 words, including an extended video conversation