The opening of your book carries an enormous amount of weight because it has to hook a reader, establish your voice, introduce your world, and make someone feel they simply have to keep going. That's a lot to ask of three chapters, and it's very hard to judge how well yours are doing that job when you're the one who wrote them.

Sophie brings an expert eye to exactly this. She'll give you an honest, detailed picture of what your opening is achieving. Because these chapters are also central to the submission process, her feedback will help you put your strongest foot forward whether you're querying agents or preparing to publish independently.

The combination of thorough written notes and a dedicated video call means  you'll leave with a clear action plan. You'll know what to work on, how to approach it, and why it matters, giving you the confidence and direction to revise with purpose.

A confirmation email will arrive shortly with further instructions on how to send Sophie your materials. She will review within 7 business days, then send you a booking link for your conversation.

If you are having any issues with the platform or services, please contact our support team at [email protected] and we will work with you to find the best possible solution up to and including refunds if necessary.

However we do not provide refunds for services already rendered.